He waited. Years, months, days. Sometimes he wished he had crossed out the dates on the calendar, to quantify the longest wait of his life.
And now it was here. He shivered in excitement. Goosebumps erupted. He saw it, he felt it, he imbibed the sensation with his soul.
He just experienced his first snowfall.
Well, if I have to see snow fall, then I've to go out of this city ;) so still time is there.
ReplyDeleteUnlikely ending to your 55er. keeping in line with the form of course :D well done.
thanks Leo! am sure, one day you shall see... so better start crossing out the dates from tomorrow :D
DeleteLots of 55 fictions...nice...but I want a longer read next
ReplyDeletemajor writer's block! :(
Deletehmmmmmmm now that is in itself a experience .. the first snowfall.. I had mine when I came to uk a few years back ..
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i am yet to experience such a feeling! :(
DeleteBeautiful, First time you see snow flakes falling and melting as you catch them, you go crazy. It is an experience you cherish for life, beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I'm sure the experience was ethereal I'm yet to experience it :)
ReplyDeleteNice expression, Apala:)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Rahul... hope to see more of you here :)
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