He caressed her face, touched her slightly parted lips. Gently grabbing the nape of her neck, he passed a hand through her hair. His hands reached her supple bosom, rested there for a while. He planted a soft kiss on her forehead.
"She is my best creation", he smiled, putting down his hammer and chisel.
Noooooooooo
ReplyDeletewere u longing for more? :P
DeleteAny doubts? :p
DeleteAhh..very nice!!! :)
ReplyDeletethanks debatri! glad you liked it!
Delete:) Very good!
ReplyDeleteRajrupa! so good to see you here! thanks!
Deletelovely :) and your blog's new look is great!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ash! changed looks again :)
Deleteawefu**ingsome !!
ReplyDeletehahaha! Thanks Rahul!
DeleteGreat Apala! Rahul-like start and surprising end :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much CS! Wanted to build up and then bring in the twist! Hence the Rahul-like start! :P
DeleteAh.. someone's practicing their flash fictions ;)
ReplyDeleteLovely write up and the twist was really unexpected & got a LOL out. :D the build up to it was very sensual too ;) good work!
its my turn to LOL now!! practice n me? naaah!
DeleteThanks anyway! hope the sensual start to the post served the intent :P
LOL good one :) so you build the expectation and poof ! wonderful !
ReplyDeletehaha! Thanks TTT...!! :)
Deleteooops .. mind goes all over , Nice one .. and the twist brings you back..
ReplyDeleteLoved reading it
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