Monday, July 16, 2012

His Lady Love

He caressed her face, touched her slightly parted lips. Gently grabbing the nape of her neck, he passed a hand through her hair. His hands reached her supple bosom, rested there for a while. He planted a soft kiss on her forehead.

"She is my best creation", he smiled, putting down his hammer and chisel.
 
 

18 comments:

  1. Ahh..very nice!!! :)

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    1. Rajrupa! so good to see you here! thanks!

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  3. lovely :) and your blog's new look is great!

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  4. Great Apala! Rahul-like start and surprising end :)

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    1. Thank you so much CS! Wanted to build up and then bring in the twist! Hence the Rahul-like start! :P

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  5. Ah.. someone's practicing their flash fictions ;)

    Lovely write up and the twist was really unexpected & got a LOL out. :D the build up to it was very sensual too ;) good work!

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    1. its my turn to LOL now!! practice n me? naaah!
      Thanks anyway! hope the sensual start to the post served the intent :P

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  6. LOL good one :) so you build the expectation and poof ! wonderful !

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  7. ooops .. mind goes all over , Nice one .. and the twist brings you back..

    Loved reading it

    Bikram's

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