Sunday, July 14, 2013

The First Crush

THE ULTIMATE BLOG CHALLENGE DAY 14
 

Her adept fingers crafted a boat with the letter. A letter to her crush, her first. She cycled up to his house, the last in the water-logged lane. Cautiously, she placed the boat on the still water near his  door. 

She was certain her love boat shall reach him.

She had used waterproof ink.


This post is written for the 55 Fictionist Contest, hosted by IndiBlosp. Also shared with Write Tribe - The Ultimate Blog Challenge - Day 14


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8 comments:

  1. SuKupedia ™ :) :)July 15, 2013 at 2:36 AM

    water proof ink? very intelligent eh? :D :D .. you just finished an entire love story in so few words O_O..

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  2. Cynthia Rodrigues ManchekarJuly 15, 2013 at 11:04 AM

    What a smart girl! To use water proof ink and fashion the letter into a boat and release it in the water next to his house.
    And hats off to you for writing a complete story in just 55 words.

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  3. Bhavya NJuly 15, 2013 at 11:12 AM

    What a unique way to confess your crush :D

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  4. Shilpa GargJuly 15, 2013 at 2:46 PM

    So sweet and so smart tooo! :D

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  5. C SureshJuly 15, 2013 at 3:47 PM

    I sure hope the water was flowing in the right direction :)

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  6. Richa SinghJuly 15, 2013 at 7:38 PM

    The waterproof ink :D I need some its raining like cats and dogs here husband stays at home how to send letters to the boyfriend :D :D

    Richa

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  7. PixieJuly 16, 2013 at 9:29 AM

    So sweet!! She's a very smart girl as well!! :)

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  8. ShailJuly 23, 2013 at 2:15 AM

    Smart resourceful girl. :)

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