Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Rains and Her




Her black tresses like rain clouds.
Mildly fragrant,
Like season's first shower.






This post has been linked with Haiku Heights and today's prompt is "RAIN"


18 comments:

  1. I can almost see it and smell it. Very evocative!

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    1. Thank you Jolly! glad to see you here. Keep visiting!

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  2. romantic ...just can t stop appreciating it.Wonderful flow of emotions

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  3. You were wrong when you said Tagore's song soothe you. They don't just soothe you. They inspire you to write too!! =)

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    1. ya Sudeshna, i guess it has effect... it is always magical to me! :)

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  4. very sensual and romantic yet mysterious. Very nice!
    Mine is here
    Have you a FANTABULOUS WEEK!!!
    hugs
    shakira

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  5. Wonderfully composed verse ... thank you for sharing.

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    1. Thanks Kristjaan! thanks for visiting. Hope to see more of you here!

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  6. Reminds of some Bollywood song ;) :D Quite well composed!

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    1. Leo... you will always have bad comments for me :P
      anyway, glad to know that you liked this bollywoody verse! :P

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  7. The real fragrance of rain can be felt only when you are inside a deep forest, or you are lonely on a cliff. They come down to you one by one like the fairies with an unknown fragrance each time. Each time they come down like a herd of wild goose forming that great V, the smell of Ivy even envy.

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