Saturday, July 6, 2013

Sand

THE ULTIMATE BLOG CHALLENGE DAY 6

 

Mesmerizing beauty,

Like quicksand

I drown in your love.

Ink drops By at
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21 comments:

  1. MeJuly 6, 2013 at 11:36 PM

    Apala,
    Love as a quicksand..WOW!!
    never thought of it that way..

    I admire those who can convey in few words..cuz I am pathetic at it!!!More More More!!! :D

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    1. Apala SenguptaJuly 8, 2013 at 1:16 AM

      Thanku soooo much! I am actually the lazy kind, so prefer posts with fewest words :P

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  2. MarkJuly 6, 2013 at 11:39 PM

    Quicksand isn't something to mess with!

    Sand Squiggles

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  3. SuKupedia ™ :) :)July 7, 2013 at 2:47 AM

    I liked what you wrote... but I felt as though there is more to it...

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    1. Apala SenguptaJuly 8, 2013 at 1:17 AM

      maybe I should create a sequel to this haiku! good idea! :)

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  4. PixieJuly 7, 2013 at 10:28 AM

    Wow!
    I love how you convey so much with such less words!
    Profound and beautiful :)

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  5. the little princessJuly 7, 2013 at 10:49 AM

    that equating of the quicksand to drowning in love is so lovely...wish i cud do a haiku someday..!

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    1. Apala SenguptaJuly 8, 2013 at 1:18 AM

      how about a haiku in these 31 days? i would love to read one by u :)

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  6. Richa SinghJuly 7, 2013 at 1:31 PM

    Such a beautiful haiku! I love them so much, they are the simplest ways to express something very profound :)

    Richa

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    1. Apala SenguptaJuly 8, 2013 at 1:19 AM

      thanks Richa! indeed haiku is a strong weapon of expression :)

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  7. AnonymousJuly 7, 2013 at 10:41 PM

    I love it, truly beautiful =)

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  8. kalpana solsiJuly 7, 2013 at 11:17 PM

    Beautiful. Love and quick sand compared.

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  9. Shilpa GargJuly 7, 2013 at 11:34 PM

    That's a good one.... liked the analogy!

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  10. The Solitary WriterJuly 9, 2013 at 8:39 AM

    Brilliant! But I am not sure about 6-3-5 Syllabi Haiku structure.. :o

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    1. Apala SenguptaJuly 9, 2013 at 8:47 AM

      Thanks TSW! traditional Haiku adheres to 5-7-5 syllable count, but modern haiku may or may not follow that structure!

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  11. GayuJuly 10, 2013 at 10:24 AM

    beautiful..romantic and .....:)

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