Saturday, July 6, 2013

Sand

THE ULTIMATE BLOG CHALLENGE DAY 6

 

Mesmerizing beauty,

Like quicksand

I drown in your love.

21 comments:

  1. Apala,
    Love as a quicksand..WOW!!
    never thought of it that way..

    I admire those who can convey in few words..cuz I am pathetic at it!!!More More More!!! :D

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    1. Thanku soooo much! I am actually the lazy kind, so prefer posts with fewest words :P

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  2. I liked what you wrote... but I felt as though there is more to it...

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    1. maybe I should create a sequel to this haiku! good idea! :)

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  3. Wow!
    I love how you convey so much with such less words!
    Profound and beautiful :)

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  4. that equating of the quicksand to drowning in love is so lovely...wish i cud do a haiku someday..!

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    1. how about a haiku in these 31 days? i would love to read one by u :)

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  5. Such a beautiful haiku! I love them so much, they are the simplest ways to express something very profound :)

    Richa

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    1. thanks Richa! indeed haiku is a strong weapon of expression :)

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  6. Beautiful. Love and quick sand compared.

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  7. That's a good one.... liked the analogy!

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  8. Brilliant! But I am not sure about 6-3-5 Syllabi Haiku structure.. :o

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    1. Thanks TSW! traditional Haiku adheres to 5-7-5 syllable count, but modern haiku may or may not follow that structure!

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  9. beautiful..romantic and .....:)

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