Apala,Love as a quicksand..WOW!!never thought of it that way..I admire those who can convey in few words..cuz I am pathetic at it!!!More More More!!! :D
Thanku soooo much! I am actually the lazy kind, so prefer posts with fewest words :P
Quicksand isn't something to mess with!Sand Squiggles
and so is love! :D
I liked what you wrote... but I felt as though there is more to it...
maybe I should create a sequel to this haiku! good idea! :)
Wow!I love how you convey so much with such less words!Profound and beautiful :)
thanks much Pixie! :)
that equating of the quicksand to drowning in love is so lovely...wish i cud do a haiku someday..!
how about a haiku in these 31 days? i would love to read one by u :)
Such a beautiful haiku! I love them so much, they are the simplest ways to express something very profound :) Richa
thanks Richa! indeed haiku is a strong weapon of expression :)
I love it, truly beautiful =)
thanks much :)
Beautiful. Love and quick sand compared.
thanks kalpana! :)
That's a good one.... liked the analogy!
thanks shilpa :)
Brilliant! But I am not sure about 6-3-5 Syllabi Haiku structure.. :o
Thanks TSW! traditional Haiku adheres to 5-7-5 syllable count, but modern haiku may or may not follow that structure!
beautiful..romantic and .....:)