Aha! Liked your take on the prompt... the picture and the words compliment each other. Very nice :)
oh ho.. liked it liked it.. read it like thrice and then figured it out.. nice nice :)
Very imaginative!Kathyhttp://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Very nice! :)I am still struggling with writing one! :(
Lovely Haiku. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Shows more than it tells and the image compliments it so well ! Do you think the juxtaposition could be achieved better by putting "A waterlogged lane" as the first line? (just a thought !)
awww....so nice! in so few words u have managed to convey that things look different when seen from each one's perspective... hai na? beautiful! when will i ever write a haiku?
Reminds me of U Apala..Beautiful Red in the sea of Grey :)
This challenge is so interesting and love Ruchira's suggestions.
cool Haikuthis ones my fav so far ;)came from write tribe
wonderful haiku! Brings back childhood memories.----My haiku.
Aha! Liked your take on the prompt... the picture and the words compliment each other. Very nice :)
ReplyDeleteoh ho.. liked it liked it.. read it like thrice and then figured it out.. nice nice :)
ReplyDeleteVery imaginative!
ReplyDeleteKathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Very nice! :)
ReplyDeleteI am still struggling with writing one! :(
Lovely Haiku. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Shows more than it tells and the image compliments it so well !
ReplyDeleteDo you think the juxtaposition could be achieved better by putting "A waterlogged lane" as the first line? (just a thought !)
awww....so nice! in so few words u have managed to convey that things look different when seen from each one's perspective... hai na? beautiful!
ReplyDeletewhen will i ever write a haiku?
Reminds me of U Apala..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Red in the sea of Grey :)
This challenge is so interesting and love Ruchira's suggestions.
ReplyDeletecool Haiku
ReplyDeletethis ones my fav so far ;)
came from write tribe
wonderful haiku! Brings back childhood memories.
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My haiku.