The Ultimate Blog Challenge Day 2
Gentle touch, brush akin,
Skin to skin.
A moment's passion,
Sudden gone.
A kiss was it? Or accident?
Trembling lips,
A heartbeat skips.
A moment's dawn,
Sudden gone.
A kiss was it? Or accident?
Warmth in eyes,
The twinkle implies.
Ah! what bliss,
An accidental kiss.
Sigh. That's lovely :)
ReplyDeleteThanks much, Shail :)
Deleteawwww.....the lines themelves as delicate as that accidental kiss! loved it!
ReplyDeleteeee!! ty ty little princess! :D
DeleteWhat bliss. Lovely write :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Bhavya!
DeleteSudden kiss... A mistake or the start of something beautiful?!
ReplyDeleteHow about...."accidentally beautiful"!
DeleteI always love such poetries they etch the picture so well one wonders this actually happened *wink wink*
ReplyDeleteRicha
aww! thank u Richa!
DeleteA kiss sure it was :) :)... vow well put :)
ReplyDeleteahaa! then a kiss it was! thanks anyway! :)
DeleteWhat a beautiful, meaningful poem. I wish I could write poetry as you do!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sophie! Am sure you r better! :)
DeleteThanks! :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a pretty poem!
ReplyDeleteNICE
ReplyDeleteNICE
ReplyDeleteLovely. All the first kisses are accidental, I believe :)
ReplyDeleteAha! I like this! ;)
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