Silver sweat beads trickled down his face, the wet shirt clung to his skin. Hearing them behind him, he manouvered skillfully through the maze-like alleys, jumping over the neihbourhood walls, ducking through gaps in fences. His breath grew louder, almost audible now.
A voice rang in his ears "Run dude, faster!"
It gave him an adrenaline boost. He was running faster than ever. What he didn't see was a small brick in the middle of the lane. And he fell face flat on the bare, cold, lifeless gravel.
"Uggghhhh damn! I die again!" Dev shouts in frustration!
This flash-fiction is an example of Drabble, which indicates a story with 100 words.
he he he he :) I like that .. sound like me when i a on my gamestationReplyDelete
LOL... isn't this the story of most guys!? :DDelete
ha ha...Good OneReplyDelete
Thanks Jaish! wrote light after a long time!Delete
It absolutely reminded me of "Temple Run" :P .. A nice attempt of Drabble :) ..ReplyDelete
Hey Megha! You did hit the bulls eye! This eye cropped up while playing Temple Run! am kinda addicted to it these days! :)Delete
Good attempt of Drabble...liked it :)ReplyDelete
Thanks Odyzz! glad you liked it :)Delete
Respawn again and again, nice. Though you could stretch the suspense in another sense to make it more goose-bumpy...ReplyDelete
the 100 word limit made me restrain from further goose-bumpy descriptions :(Delete
Aaah so u killed me? just because I am d better temple runner?ReplyDelete
:D :D i have better one-time score than you :PDelete
Go run in a real temple :PReplyDelete