Wednesday, November 7, 2012

Kidnapped...!!!

He was thrust onto a wooden chair, a cloth hastily coiled around his neck which immobilized him immediately. The corner of his eye caught the light reflecting off a gleaming,sharp metal blade. He felt the cold of the metal behind his neck. A shiver went down his spine. 

"Short or medium", the barber asked.

17 comments:

  1. wow, u just gave me an idea...i have been wanting to execute cold blooded violence lately

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    1. my post shouldnt get tracked down, in that case! :P

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  2. love love love it!!!! I try so hard not t read the last line in these posts!

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  3. Hahaha! That was one hilarious twist, Apala!

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    1. LOL...!! i try to turn the 55ers in the last line!

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  4. you have become the expert in creating the short fiction stories...Good one..

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    1. wow Venkat! Thanks! but no expert, just trying!

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  5. LOL! That was really interesting and twister...:)

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    1. haha! Thanks Saru! so glad to see you here!

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  6. Oh My! You got me there! Superb Apala!

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  7. Hahaha! Lovely one apala!! Looks like this month I was into writing fff too!! ;) do stop by!

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  8. Er.. maybe it is a hairnap, rather than a kidnap ;) :D Lovely one.

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  9. The shortest thriller I've ever read! :D Awesome..

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