Thursday, August 4, 2011

The Parting

The silence spoke volumes. He looked into her eyes. The otherwise shiny,black beady eyes did not speak today. She sipped the steaming cappuccino. Both knew families were the only problem and parting was the only solution. She was to  marry a stranger.

She came close. They kissed.

She logged out from skype and walked off.


  1. beautiful.poignant.loved it!

  2. Hi, It's a good start definitely. I would say is work upon the twist in the end, this one was somewhat predictable.

    Keep writing.

  3. Thanks for taking out time and reading it...!! I will definitely work upon it :)