Sunday, July 21, 2013

The Birthday Gift

THE ULTIMATE BLOG CHALLENGE DAY 21 - 55 FICTION


She promised me a gift. 
"Neel, it's the most priceless present I can afford!"
...and ever since, I've been waiting.
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My birthday today. One with a dry mouth and fluttering tummy.

I was led into a room. 
Ah! There she was. And my gift!

"Happy Birthday, proud Father!" She placed a cherub in my arms.



7 comments:

  1. So so sweet...that's like the bestest gift anyone can get....WONDERFUL!

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  2. what can be a more perfect gift? sweet , very sweet!

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  3. Wowwww!!! That is definitely the best and most perfect birthday gift ever :) :)

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  4. Who wouldn't want that man! (I know some who may get scared :P) What a lovely drabble :) wonderfully written :)

    Richa

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  5. aww!! Such a fabulous gift! :)
    beautifully written!

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