Breathe In. Breathe Out. In. Out.
The last one in her hand. A dozen minus one, on the ground, mutilated, strewn around her feet.
One gently glides to her feet, then another, and yet another...
Loves me. Loves me not. Loves me. Loves me not......
Finally the last petal.
And a tear in her eye.
Loves me! :)
ReplyDeleteYes Rajrupa! thats the ending we all wish for! :)
DeleteLoves you...that's for sure....that said - longer posts! :/
ReplyDeleteLol!! :D
DeleteLong post very soon! :)
lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks much meenakshi! :)
DeleteTears of joy or sorrow?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines..
Tears of joy or sorrow is what the whole question is! what shall each one of want to choose? :)
DeleteGlad that you liked it!
Loved that! Open-ended finish!
ReplyDeleteThank you CS! I tried an open-ended finish for the first time!
DeleteWow....nice especially the end...
ReplyDeleteThanks Himani! Glad you liked it :)
DeleteHey I have nominated you for the popular "Liebster Award".
ReplyDeletehttp://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/2013/02/first-blogger-award_7.html
Proves we must start with a negative to end up with a positive when it comes to counting petals ;)
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