Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Loves Me...Loves me Not




Breathe In. Breathe Out. In. Out.
The last one in her hand. A dozen minus one, on the ground, mutilated, strewn around her feet.

One gently glides to her feet, then another, and yet another...

Loves me. Loves me not. Loves me. Loves me not......

Finally the last petal.

And a tear in her eye.




14 comments:

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    1. Yes Rajrupa! thats the ending we all wish for! :)

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  2. Loves you...that's for sure....that said - longer posts! :/

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  3. Tears of joy or sorrow?
    Beautiful lines..

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    1. Tears of joy or sorrow is what the whole question is! what shall each one of want to choose? :)
      Glad that you liked it!

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    1. Thank you CS! I tried an open-ended finish for the first time!

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  5. Hey I have nominated you for the popular "Liebster Award".
    http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/2013/02/first-blogger-award_7.html

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  6. Proves we must start with a negative to end up with a positive when it comes to counting petals ;)

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