Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Loves Me...Loves me Not




Breathe In. Breathe Out. In. Out.
The last one in her hand. A dozen minus one, on the ground, mutilated, strewn around her feet.

One gently glides to her feet, then another, and yet another...

Loves me. Loves me not. Loves me. Loves me not......

Finally the last petal.

And a tear in her eye.




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14 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 29, 2013 at 1:35 PM

    Loves me! :)

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    1. Apala SenguptaFebruary 5, 2013 at 10:40 PM

      Yes Rajrupa! thats the ending we all wish for! :)

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  2. DevJanuary 29, 2013 at 2:23 PM

    Loves you...that's for sure....that said - longer posts! :/

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  3. Woman'n'BeyondJanuary 29, 2013 at 3:47 PM

    lovely!

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  4. Sri ValliJanuary 29, 2013 at 3:57 PM

    Tears of joy or sorrow?
    Beautiful lines..

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    1. Apala SenguptaFebruary 5, 2013 at 10:42 PM

      Tears of joy or sorrow is what the whole question is! what shall each one of want to choose? :)
      Glad that you liked it!

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  5. C SureshJanuary 30, 2013 at 12:19 PM

    Loved that! Open-ended finish!

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    1. Apala SenguptaFebruary 5, 2013 at 10:42 PM

      Thank you CS! I tried an open-ended finish for the first time!

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  6. Himani AgarwalFebruary 1, 2013 at 10:49 PM

    Wow....nice especially the end...

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  7. Karan ShahFebruary 7, 2013 at 10:24 AM

    Hey I have nominated you for the popular "Liebster Award".
    http://advkaranshah.blogspot.in/2013/02/first-blogger-award_7.html

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  8. Vinay Leo R.June 29, 2013 at 11:44 PM

    Proves we must start with a negative to end up with a positive when it comes to counting petals ;)

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