Saturday, September 8, 2012

Sophia's Red Balloon


A Red Balloon - Happy Birthday Sophia, Love Dad. 

Turned into a ritual ever since Sophia was five. Even when Jeremy was at war for three years, he never missed to send Sophia the red balloon.

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Sophia turns eighteen today. Jeremy, with staggering gait, reach the cemetery with a flower bouquet and a red balloon.

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15 comments:

  1. C SureshSeptember 8, 2012 at 1:19 PM

    Oh! Unexpected tragic twist.

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  2. The Solitary WriterSeptember 8, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    yes indeed unexpected

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  3. UnknownSeptember 8, 2012 at 10:13 PM

    That's what I love about your writings... you shock your readers! Very nice it was!

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  4. Harshita SrivastavaSeptember 9, 2012 at 11:21 AM

    WOW

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  5. UnknownSeptember 9, 2012 at 3:32 PM

    Nice..nice...

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  6. UnknownSeptember 9, 2012 at 7:53 PM

    You throw an unexpected twist in every tale that you write... Once again a beautiful heart touching story...

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    1. Apala SenguptaSeptember 9, 2012 at 10:15 PM

      Thanku Ruby Di! am so glad you read and take out time to provide your feedback! :)

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  7. DebatriSeptember 9, 2012 at 10:16 PM

    This I add to my favourites. So very poignant!

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  8. Jayashree SrivatsanSeptember 11, 2012 at 11:23 AM

    That was shocking! Awesome twist!

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  9. Tanya SehgalOctober 19, 2012 at 6:05 PM

    Such a powerful plot. Nicely portrayed, the idea was touching at the same time!

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